"woah you give me a cold shoulder" Should be: "though you give a cold shoulder" The rest reads fine, although i thought the band was "bob glitter and the Glitterhouse five"? And chance you remember the lyrics to the end song? i can not recall the first Line and its driving me nuts" (something) is sorrow, The devil is hate. A dream is tomorrow, A fool can not wait. An artist is beauty that rises above, And looks in the eyes of an angel. An angel is love...! Why...! why do i love you, i love you, i do. Why...? it's because my angel is you. I know, yes, i know. I know. (repeat first part much faster) End